哪位英语高手帮我解决这个啊

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/07 03:48:13
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Dear editor:
I am a high school student.A few days before,one of my very good friend tole me that he was going to stop the school.He said that he wanted to start his own business. I tried best to get him to change his mind,but I failed.
I know it s difficult of him to change his mind.He is not doing so good in his studies,yet I want to insist that I give it a try. The process is more important than the results.Now there is only 60 days left before that test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong.I needed your advice

Yours
Li Hua
修改错误啊 大哥 不是翻译

亲爱的编辑:
我是一个高中生,几天前,我的一个很好的朋友告诉我,他要离开学校,他说他想要开始自己的事业。我想他改变了主意,但是我失败了。
我知道这是困难的,让他改变了主意,他不做的太好了在他的学习,但我想强调我试一试。这个过程比结果更重要的,现在只剩下的60天前测试。我不知道他的决定是正确的还是错误的. 我需要你的意见。
你的
李华