【急】这句话有没有语病----高手进

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RT,句子如下:
I realized that the explanation in my text book was not adequate and that I needed to learn much more in pure maths before I could even begin to comprehend the problem.
万分感谢!

不知道你的这句的语境是什么样子的

但如果如果用have realized 表示一般完成时,是一个由不知道到知道的过程会不会更好一些?

I have realized that the explanation in my text is not adequate and I need to(去掉that,and后面不加that,needed变need,我需要做某事,是一般现代时,不应用一般过去时)to learn much more about(learn about sth.) pure maths before I could be able to(could be able to强调能够做到...) begin to(可加也可以省略)comprehend the problem(或problems,没有特指也可以)

希望你满意~祝好运