求高手帮忙检查一下英语作文（8年级），很着急！

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求高手帮忙检查一下英语作文,从语法上看有没有毛病，有没有用词不当的地方，具体内容不用挑。我明天早上要交，所以请大家快速详细地帮忙。谢谢谢谢谢谢谢谢！
an Accident
One day,Michael was playing with his friends in the park.But he was so careless that had an accident and fell down.He hurt his left leg but not very serious. He felt terrible. Kangkang and Maria went to call a taxi for Michael and Jane looked after him.They took him to the hospital soon.Dr. Jiang checked him over and asked him to stay in bed for two weeks.During the two weeks,his friends often came to visithim and brought flowers and fruit.They told Michael not to worry about his lessons because they would help him with them.
Two weeks later,Michael got well and he returned home happily with his friends.

An Accident(题目首字母要用大写）
One day,Michael was playing(应为有was所以为过去时playing要改成play) with his friends in the park.But he was so careless that had（之前有用过was所以had应该为原型have) an accident and fell down.He hurt his left leg but not very serious. He felt terrible.Kangkang and Maria went to call a taxi for（a taxi for？这是什么意思？完全不明白） Michael and Jane looked after him.They took him to the hospital soon.During the two weeks,his friends often（often是一般现代时的标志所以应把often去掉） came to visit him and brought flowers and fruit. They told Michael not to worry about his lessons because they would help him with them.
Two weeks later（这个不太好应改成after two weeks）,Michael got well and he returned home happily with his friends.

也许有的没看出来，不过我已经很努力了
好好学习！

很多错误，中国式英语

One day,Michael was playing with his friends in the park.But he was so careless that （加个主语he）had an accident and fell down（最好把fell down去掉）.He hurt his left leg ,fortunately（加上这个词好些，总用but显得太单调）,it's not very serious. He felt