请帮忙修改下语法错误

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Except this 2pcs failure module, I hold other 5pcs failure module with open, short, etc.

Did you need there module, if your need, I will send you with 99pcs marginal failure module, and keep these separated.

中文意思,除了2个失效模块,我还有其他30个失效模块因为短路,开路等.
请问你需要这30个吗?如果需要我将把他们放在那20个一起邮寄给你,并分开放置.
翻译成英文.

Besides these 2 failure modules, I still have other 30 failure modules with open, short, etc.

Do you need the modules? if you need them, I will send them to you with the 20 marginal failure modules, and keep them separated.

Except those two failed modules, I had another thirty modules failed due to short circuit, incomplete circuit and so on. Do you need these thirty modules? If necessary, I will pack them up separately and send them to you.

Exclude two pieces of invalidation modules, I have had other five pieces of invalidation modules which with short circuit problem, open circuit problem, and other problems.

I would like to know whether or not you want these thirty modules. I will send them sperated to you with those twenty modules if you want.

PS:
a.公文写作不要有阿拉伯数字，除非是超过20的非整数，如21，25，36；或者3位数以上，如100，120，135.
b.在提到请求，对方等，要使用客气的语气，不要用can, must, as soon as possible 等。尽量使用 would like, quite fine等。
c.公文写作不要用缩写，如etc.,