(20点)请求英文大师帮我检查我的英文演讲稿是否有错误!?

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/09/25 02:32:49
求求各位英文好手帮我 检查我的英文演讲稿,演讲时间是5分钟

我自己有制作powerpoint ,我会边演讲边播放pwerpoint

这是我第一次用英文报告

请帮我检查我的英文演讲稿顺畅吗？

因为我也不太清楚, 我这样打到底对不对

文法不知道有没有用错, 或是单字打错

因为演讲时间是5分钟,有没有哪里需要删掉的

希望英文大师能够帮帮我!!~谢谢~

hello everyone
today I'll put it into two parts,
First is The people in my life and second is my interests
next I'm introducing the topic is the people in my life
I think all of lifes ups and downs
smiles and tears achivments and disapointments
People, places, and experiences have made me who I am today, but also a big influence on my life
has been the times in which I have lived.
definitely my parents made me what i am today
My parents have always been pretty supportive and told me to do my best and everything I do well are partly due to them.

This is my mom ,she is a typical Leo (她是典型的狮子座)
Her motto is “Belive that you're able to do it”
M

hello everyone
today I'm going to split this presentation into two parts,
the First one is all about The people in my life and the second part to be teld will be my interests
I am sure of that all the profiles of the life, no matter ups or downs,
smiles or tears, achivments or disapointments,
persons, places, or experiences that passed to anyone eles,which should lead to the same destination,but result diferently in myself. Here we are within my heart, I was ,I am, and I will making these sentimentes to ensure that i have benefitted from this kind of living, this sort of thoughts that made me a better man today.And certainly I want you all to be benefitted from my enthusiasm for my friends, right?

definitely my parents made me what i am today
My parents have always been pretty supportive and they told me to do my best at everything. my best performance are partly due to their devotion and endless love, well, thank every mother and