帮忙改正语法错误

这段话的英语实在太不地道了....我给你改了一下

Here is the home to the secret virgin forest and the last emperor's palace. Here we had the birth of the first Chinese car and the first Chinese movie. What's more, there's a vibrant and special nightlife, and all these attractions are for you. What are you waiting for!

Have you ever been to the secret virgin forest? Do you want to see the last emprior's palace? Aren't you curious about the look of the first car produced in China? Wanna see the first movie made in China?
Things you can't miss is all here, and it's all for you! What are you waiting for? Come and visit ........

不好意思.题目是纠错.本该改动一些词就好了.但是,个人觉得,一直是开头词,一直都是陈述句,不能引人入胜.
如果把陈述句变成疑问句,再稍微换一下词语搭配,会更让人有兴趣.
本文仅供参考.

只改动语法错误是不够的，要大改哦，因为原文确实有点平淡，而且不够地道。

润色策略
1句型换为倒装句（起强调作用；平衡结构）
2句式多样化（全是“这里有，这里有……”可不好哦）
3让单词更得体
Here are the secret virgin forest and the last emprior's palace. Here are the first car