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In my opinion, life is a pity. when you face the death, you will find in this life, there are too many things. no one can race against time. so don't leave too many things in your bucket list.
first, i want to make friends with the people who i have met. and all my friends are love me and care about me. i think it's a dream. so i will leave it in my bucket list. second, i want to own the money which i can spend on the things that i want to do. If i have only a little money, i will consider to earn more money to live better. if i have a lot of money, i will not necessarily happy. so own the money i need is not a easy thing.
third, stay with my parents when they need me.后面再加点关于陪陪父母的
我英语很菜 好几年没学了 现在写的就是初中水平 今天有个发表 希望高手给我改改 别太难 谢谢！

In my opinion, life is a pity. When you face death, you will realize that there there are so many things that you have not done or experienced in your life. No one can race against time, so do not leave too many things in your bucket list.
For me, there are many things that i want to do. Firstly, i would like to make friends with the people whom i have met. I know that all my friends love and care about me. i think this dream is not going to come true. so i will leave it in my bucket list. second, i want to own the money which i can spend on the things that i want to do. If i have insufficient amount of money, i will consider to earn more money so as to live better. if i have lots of money, i will not necessarily be happy. so own the money i need is not a easy thing.
third, stay with my parents when they need me.I care and love my parents. I want to spend time with them, perhaps watch a movie together.

As for me, life is really a pity. when facing the death, you