帮忙做个改错！~

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Time fly like an arrow.I'm already in the second half of Senior Grade 3 before I realized it.IT is only a little more than three months before I graduate middle school At the present I'm busy review my lessons in order to take the College Entrance Examination.I hoppe to go to Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not only in China but also in the world.I'll try my best turn my dream to reality.Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize our wishes.I do believe everyone will be able to enter a very good university and college~
一共10处错误 麻烦大家了 详细说明哪错了标出来为什么错了我加分

flies time不可数

graduate from high school, middle school 是初中

there are 用there be句型,a little more than three months比三个月还多一点,用复数

at present 固定用法at present或者at the present time

reviewing 词组busy doing something

and that is one of 两句独立句子用连词连接

to turn 词组try one's best to do

into reality 词组turn into reality

their wishes 主语most of my classmates不包含我,不能用our

enter a very good university or college 主语everyone,每个人不能同时进大学和学院,所以是大学或者学院

Time flies like an arrow.

before I realize it.

graduate from middle school

At present

I'm busy reviewing...

,which is one of the best...

I'll try my best to turn ...

into reality

thieri wishes

or college

Time flys （第三人称）like an arrow.I'm already in the second half of Senior Grade 3 before I realized it.IT is only a little more than three months b