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请进来的英语老师帮我改2篇作文,在线等,先谢了.
1. make tomatoes egg soup
first,boil the water,cut up tomatoes.Next,put tomatoes and egg in water.cook three munites.Then add sugar and a little of oil to soup,finally eat it.
2.first ,cut up the tomatoes ,boil the noodles .Next,put in water and relish ,boil,Then put in egg .Finally,drink tomatoes soup.
1. make tomatoes egg soup
first,boil the water,cut up tomatoes.Next,put tomatoes and egg in water.cook three munites.Then add sugar and a little of oil to soup,finally eat it.
2.first ,cut up the tomatoes ,boil the noodles .Next,put in water and relish ,boil,Then put in egg .Finally,drink tomatoes soup.
第2行 put tomatoes and egg in water 改为 into
第三行 Then add sugar and a little of oil to soup 应把 of 去掉
第四行.Next,put in water and relish 改为 into
Then put in egg 改为“put egg into the
soup
还有，开头字母要大写
1. First, slice up the tomatoes while boiling the water .
Next, put the tomatoe slices and egg gruel（蛋糊） into the soup and cook for three munites.
Then add sugar and a little oil into the soup.
Finally, you can eat it.
2. First, slice up the tomatoes while boiling the noodles.
Next, put the tomato slices into the water and flavor it ,and let the water boil,
Then put in egg gruel .
Finally, drink the tomatoe soup.