短文改错,在线等,急!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/28 14:52:28
Xiaohong's father bought him a new bike.which 1?
made her very exciting.So she rode her bike fast 2?
on the road.Suddenly whild she found a man 3?
was nearing her,she could stop the bike andknocked into 4?
the man.However,the kind-hearted man doesn't get 5?
angry.In stead of he told xiaohong how dangerous it 6?
was to ride so fast. Xiaohong felt very sorry for what 7?
she did.In her surprise,the man bent down to repair 8?
her new bike.Soon he got it repaired,that made 9?
Xiaohong moved.She thanked him and left happy 10?
第三行whild 是 while

1.him-her
2.exciting-excited
3.while-when
4.nearing-near
5.doesn't-didn't
6..In stead of -instead
7.对
8.in-to
9.that-which
10.happy-happily

1 bike, which 标点错误 !!如果这里是你打错了标点的话,改him为her
2 excited 形容词
3 whild 去掉 不知道是不是你打错了 总值这个词在这多余
4 near 形容词 could 后面加个not
5 doesn't 改为didn't 时态
6 去掉of 并且加个逗号
7
8 去掉her吧
9 that 改为Which
10 happily 副词

来分吧 !

1-Xiaohong's father bought him(指xiaohong) a new bike, which made him(指xiaohong) (前面是him,后面换成her?)
2-fastly
3-suddenly she found out that a man walked near her.
4-She couldn't stop the bike and knocked the man.
5-However, the kind-hearted man didn't get angry.
6-Instead, he told xiaohong how dangerous it is to ride fast.
7-Xiaohong felt very sorry for what has she done.
8-To her surprise,...
9-Soon he managed to repair the bike,that make xiaohong move on.
10-...