UC知道我写了一篇英文作为，发表一下意见。不过我才五年级。
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My family
Hello, My name is Dan Cui 1, I was a student. My father is a driver, my mother was a staff member. My dad like to watch TV at night, he did the dishes are very tasty. My mother like to exercise in the morning, dancing very well. We are a happy family.
Hello, My name is Dan Cui 1, I was a student. My father is a driver, my mother was a staff member. My dad like to watch TV at night, he did the dishes are very tasty. My mother like to exercise in the morning, dancing very well. We are a happy family.
Hello, My name is Dan Cui, I am(not "was"，因为你现在也是学生呀，所以不要用过去时）a student. My father is a driver, my mother is （如果爸爸用is， 为什么妈妈要用was呢？） a staff member. My dad likes (like-第三人称要加S) to watch TV at night, his dishes (不要用he did the dishes，不然这个句子里有两个动词) are very tasty. My mother likes (第三人称加S) to exercise in the morning, and she dances (dancing) very well. We are a happy family.
需修改处：
i am a student
my mother is a company worker
my dad likes
he makes the food very tasty
my mother likes
she dances very well
五年级的怎么爱用过去式呢？还忘了三单的问题。不过值得鼓励。学习就是在错误中前进。
my mother was a staff member-----my mother was a worker
写的很好了
写的不错