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Why do you prefer skiing in swiss alps?
The first reason is because compared to swimming I love skiing very much. I think skiing is a very interesting sport.
The second reason is that I've never been to Switzerland, I heart that Switzerland is a beautiful country.
Finally, Switzerland has 10 very well-known ski resorts, such as Zermatt, St.Moritz ,Davos and Arosa and so on.
For those reason, I prefer skiing in swiss alps.
Why do you prefer swimming in Hawaii?
The first reason is because compared to skiing I love swimming very much. I think swimming is a very interesting sport.
The second reason is that I want to go to Hawaii and see the Huladance, I only see it in the TV. I think it is very fantastic.
Finally, On the beach of Hawaii, I think I can see many beautiful girls and handsome boys. in the evening, I also can see the beautiful sunset.
For those reason, I prefer swimming in hawail.
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Why do you prefer skiing in swiss alps?
The first reason is compared to swimming I love skiing very much. I think skiing is a very interesting sport.
The second reason is that I've never been to Switzerland, I heart that Switzerland is a beautiful country.
Finally, Switzerland has 10 very well-known ski resorts, such as Zermatt, St.Moritz ,Davos and Arosa and so on.
For those reasons, I prefer skiing in swiss alps.
Why do you prefer swimming in Hawaii?
The first reason is compared to skiing I love swimming very much. I think swimming is a very interesting sport.
The second reason is that I want to go to Hawaii and see the Huladance, Ijust see it in TV. I think it is very fantastic.
Finally, On the beach of Hawaii, I think I can see many beautiful girls and handsome boys.at dusk, I also can see the beautiful sunset.
For those reasons, I prefer swimming in hawail.

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