急急急急!!英语改错!!!!

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I live in a small town in the south.This is typical
Chiness town.There are not only two main streets
which across in the middle of the town.Around the
town stand a high wall,which was built long ago and
it is still possibly to walk along it.No motorcars are
allowed in the business strees,that makes shopping
very easier and safer,On warm days some small
resraurants put table and chairs outside the houses to
let people to take a rest and have some tea or ice-cream.
There are no tall buildings but some beautiful parks.

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I live in a small town in the south.This is a typical
Chiness town.There are two main streets
crossing the middle of the town.Around the
town stands a high wall,which was built long ago and
still possibly to be walked along .No motorcars are
allowed to go on the business strees,which makes shopping
easier and safer.When it's warm ,some small
resraurants will put tables and chairs outside the houses to
let people take a rest and have some tea or ice-cream.
Instead of tall buildings there are some beautiful parks here.