英语改错 50分的。。各位高手帮帮忙哈

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I can hardly believe so, but my high school life is almost over! I always felt excited every time i think that in a few month i will graduate from high school and go to college. the first thing what i am going to do after graduation is to take long vacation! Meanwhile, i find me looking back on the past three years and thinking about all the wonderfully things that have happened and the teachers classmates i will miss. I've decided to write them down so that on someday. when i reread them , the good memories won't come back

一共有10个错误。。。各位高手帮个忙。。有急用。。。2小时内给出答案给50分

so-that
felt-feel
month-months
what-that
take long vacation-take a long vacation
me-myself
wonderfully-wonderful
the teachers classmates -the teachers and classmates
on someday- someday
won't-will

1."I can hardly believe that my..."

2."I always feel excited..."

3."the fisrt thing (that) i am going..."

4."take a long vacation"

5."looking back at the past..."

6."and think about..."

7."all the wonderful things"

8."the teachers and classmates"

9."so that someday,when..."

10."memories will come back"

felt→feel,
month+s,
what→that,
take后+a,
Meanwhile→However（“想…，然而发现自己却在…”，这里转折比较贴切,同意楼上的）
me→myself（后面的look back on是对的,不用at）
wonderfully→wonderful,
teachers后+and,on someday→someday
won't→will