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学习History 的好坏

Is the study of history useless? Some people’s answer is “yes” because they believe there are many disadvantages to spend time learning history. However, I can hardly agree this opinion.
It is evident that history studying history is very imperative. To start with, the main reason for this is due to the fact that history plays a key role in culture heritage of a nation. If the history were not studied, the related culture would be lost and the people would be unaware of what happened in the country. More importantly, studying history not only could make people know the past, but also promote today’s development. It is because that the study of history could enrich people’s experience, and therefore make them make fewer mistakes and develop faster. Lastly, there are a lot of interesting stories in history which people can enjoy in their leisure time.

Even so, I admit that there are disadvantages if people spend t

Is the study of history useless? Some people’s answer is “yes” because they believe there are many disadvantages to spend time learning history. However, I can hardly agree with this opinion.
It is evident that studying history is imperative due to history’s important role in enabling people to inherit traditional culture of their countries. If the history were not studied, the related culture would be lost and people would be unaware of what had happened before. More significantly, studying history can not only make people know the past, but also help to promote today’s development. It is because that the study of history could enrich people’s experience, and therefore make them make fewer mistakes as well as avoid similar mistakes occurred in the past and thus advance faster. Lastly, there are a lot of interesting stories in history which people can enjoy in their leisure time.

Even so, I admit that there are disadvantages if people spend too much time on past sto