要一篇关于中国崛起的初中英语作文

Now,China is the leagest developing in the world.However one hundred years ago China was a poor country . It is many years behind the Western countries.Unckily at that time, the rulers are incompetent.But nothing is impossible.Chinese people is the bravest people in the world.They have done a variety of combat(他们做了各种斗争）.Like Sun Yat-sen ,he was devoted his life to fighting against the old government and founded the first Republic in China. At last they beat the invaders won the final victory.So up till now Chinese people is very proud of their country.They belive they can build China into a prosperous(富强） country.
这样写可以吗？