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Hello,everyone,welcome to our debate,My name is ***.As we all know,it's a hot topic whether the high school students should have lessons at the weekend.What's your opinion on it,fellow students? Well,I would like to tell you my view. I don't think it's good that we high school students attend classes at weekends. Here are my reasons.First,we have many lessosns on school days,from Monday to Friday.Both our schoolwork and homework are so heavy that we don't have any spare time for relax.Second,our governments are against the idea of giving extra lessons too.We can also do well in our studies without extra classes,as long as we study diligently.
That's all,thank you.

As we all know,it's a hot topic whether the high school students should have lessons at the weekend
Both our schoolwork and homework are so heavy that we don't have any spare time to relax
Second,our government is against the idea of giving extra lessons too
We can do well in our studies without extra classes,as long as we study diligently
这几句结构不错,但有语法错误,我改了一下
第二句 for relax 改成to relax (relax 是动词)
第三句,是government, 不是governments, 我们只有一个政府
第四句,不用also比较好