求一段关于喜欢音乐的英语作文！！！！！急！

I like music

My favorite music style is punk rock, favorite singer is Avril children, like her flirtatious penetrating voice, like her unaffected
大意就是我喜欢音乐

我最喜欢的音乐风格是朋克摇滚，最喜欢的歌手是艾薇儿，喜欢她妖冶有穿透力的嗓音，喜欢她的真率
（按你说的去做了，如果你觉得少了的话，就HI我吧。我再帮你翻译，我妈是英语老师哦）

I like Avril, she has a fascinating voice, her songs attracted me.The love of the music style is punk rock, most like the singer is Avril, like her flirtatious penetrating voice, like her unaffected ... ... No singer and she as good as. In short, Avril was a perfect singer.
P.S.这是我自己写的，我也很喜欢艾薇儿，但我的英语水平不怎么样，请见谅

恩。。我就尽量帮下你吧
my favourite style of music is punk rock,my favourite singer is avril lavigne.I like her because she has a piercing voice.Her songs can excite me.
差不多了吧 我只能帮这么多 对不起啦 我对艾薇儿不熟 所以。。

Charlie and his chocolate factory
I love Charlie and his chocolate factory are an extremely interesting movie, inside the movie character are lifelike, as if with reality in type