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As is vividly depited in the cartoon,with the rapid social and economic development,the number of people who is the internet user has dramatically increased.In the picture,there is a huge“spider” web ,and consisted by many single “room”with a computer. Each of a large number of people who are online in the single room .Maybe they are communicating with others or studying on the internet .At the lower part of it ,there are several Chinese characters which read“the near and far of the Internet” .
The puepose of this picture is to show us that with the wide use of the internet, the communicates among us become convience and our relationships beome closer and closer. However,as we spend our time mostly in the internet,we gradualy let the relationships in the reality on the fade.I assume that there are several possible factors to explain why does this phenomenon of science and technology,the role of the internet is dominate in the mordern life.It has been showed a powerful, useful

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