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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/07 22:23:50
A DECADE AGO,NANCY DID WHAT SO MANY AMERICANS DREAMS ABOUT.SHE QUIT AN EXECUTIVE POSITION AND OPEN A HOUSEHOLD EQUIPMENT STORE IN HER NEIGHBORHOOD.PEOPLE LIKE NANCY MADE THE DECISION PRIMARILY BEACAUSE OF THEIR DESIRE TO IMPROVE THE QUALITY OF LIFE.

第一句:
A DECADE AGO,NANCY DID WHAT SO MANY AMERICANS DREAMS ABOUT.
“Dreams about”改为:“had dreamed about”
因为时态已经是过去的过去。

同理,第二句中的并列谓语open应该改为“opened”