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I have been to France in last summer vacation. When we arrived, I saw such a blue sky and could breath fresh air. The street in France was tidy and French quality were high .First, my parents and I was visited The Louvre Museum to saw a lot of famous arts. Then we went to Versailles Palace .I know this museum in Chinese book 1 years ago. It same as describe in book. It big but not empty and seem to be a fairy tale. After that we had some west food .It not like McDonalds nor is KFC. It taste uncomfortable to Chinese. But it also is an experience of my life. Finally, we get to Star square to met Eiffel Tower. It can equal with Great wall and it quite a grate work. This trip let me learn to enjoy life.
I have been to France during last summer vacation.When we arrived,I saw such a blue sky and could breathe fresh air.The streetin France was tidy and French people's quality were high(不确定).First,my parents and I visited The Louvre Museum to see a lot of famous arts.Then we went to Versailles Palace .I've been known this museum for 1 year from my Chinese book.It was as same as it was described in the book.It was big but not empty and it seemed to be like(也不确定) a fairy tale.After that we had some western food.It was like neither McDonalds nor KFC.It tasted much more uncomfortable than in China.But it was also an experience of my life.Finally,we got to Star Square to see the Eiffel Tower.It was just like the Great Wall and it was quite a great work.Through this trip I learn how to enjoy life.
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