英文 看下有没有语法错误

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It's always hard to sleep in the still of night when I feel lonely, although most of my life, I am(was?) alone, I didn't（have't?） feel it.

Perhaps there were somethings bad will be taken place. I try very hard to let myself don't think too much, but it doesn't work.

Am I thinking too much or it's a needless worry? No,It's you already more and more far.

Cold here, icy cold my heart. You belong to neither, my face is blue, my heart sinks down. Now, I recall the moment of our all. We all used to think about " To love and to hold, till death do us apart " and I really thought that you're a masterpiece from God to me. At that time, to the world you may be one person, but to me, you were the world.

英语语法不太好，没把握哈，特别是时态。。。。
语句不太好的也帮忙改改吧
KUANx2 maryswallow 你们第一段的修改都没有后面那个didn't feel it 啊， 就是I am alone I don't feel lonely.

第二段的take place不用被动？

整篇文章的时态应该是什么时态

不管

It’s always hard to sleep in the still of the night when I feel lonely, although most of my life, I have been alone.
Perhaps something bad will take place. I try very hard not to think too much. But I fail.

Am I thinking too much ? Am I worried too much? No. It’s all because you are getting farther and farther from me.
Cold here, icy cold in my heart. You belong to nobody. My face is blue, my heart is sinking. Now, I recall the good old days of our all. We both thought of this " To love and to hold, till death do us apart " and I really thought that you were a masterpiece from God to me. At that time, to the world you might be one person, but to me, you were the world.

Usually, I found it difficult to sleep at night due to loneliness though, I am alone for the most part of my life.

I've got an ominous presentiment about something bad is going to happen. I tried hard to not to think about it.

Perhaps, my worries are su