谁能听的懂我讲的话

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这是我口语课要讲的
哪位英语高手能告诉我,这样讲行吗,能听得懂吗》》???
My grandparents ,uncel sisters and borthers all came to my
house to celebrate the Mid-autumn Day .We played happy.
Especillay,my sister's daughters' perform which made us (开怀大笑还可以怎么翻译big laugh很土)big laugh , my sister's daughter are twins .They have chubby face
when families call them shrug shoulders ,they shrug shoulders

call them rock bottom ,they rock bottom

they are so innocent!

My grandparents, uncle, sisters and brothers all came to my house to celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival. We played happily. Especially my nieces's performance which made us all laugh heartily. They are twins. They have chubby faces. Whenever our family tells them to shrug shoulders, they shrug shoulders. Tell them to rock bottom, they rock bottom. They are so cute and innocent!

第二行,played happily.第三行。sister's daughter改称cousin吧。为什么用从句?不要which。其他还可以啦