请看下我的下面一段英语有什么疏漏之处,谢谢!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/02 01:45:34
(大意:我将有4个小时的空闲时间从今天起,因为 GOOGLE 小组增加了一名 PA,她能做许多我过去日常的工作。如果你们接到我能做的 REQUEST ,请和我说一下。)

I will have 4 hour idle times starting today, because the GOOGLE group increased a PA, she will be able to do many works replace me. If you receive any REQUEST which I can do, please say with me.
这样可以吗?
Because the GOOGLE group increased a PA, They decided She will help me to do more work. So I will have 4 hours free time starting today. And if you received any REQUEST which I can do, please tell me.

I will have 4 more hours from today, because there is a PA jioned our GOOGLE group, she can do lots of things I have done ever.
If you receive any REQUEST that I can do, please tell me.
(你是用金山译的吧 最好不要用那个东西)

she will be able to do many works replace me
他将要代替我做一些工作

please say with me, please tell me就可以了
idle times ,free time 比较通俗点 times是次数的意思吧?