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麻烦替我查看一下，如果能再润色一下就更好了，谢谢。
Faces to discrimination, the main characters in these two stories have different reactions. In the story of “The School Days of an Indian”, the author tries to find every opportunist to fight against the insensitive treatment. She tries to flee the haircutting even though she is still forced to cut her long hair. And she breaks the jar to vent the grievance since she gets an unreasonable punishment. But in the story of “In the Land of the Free”, the Chinese couple has no way to against the government. They ask a white lawyer for help, but the lawyer is also cruel because he just wants to cheat their money. Finally, they give everything they have to the lawyer and get the son back.
Faces to discrimination, the main characters in these two stories have different reactions. In the story of “The School Days of an Indian”, the author tries to find every opportunist to fight against the insensitive treatment. She tries to flee the haircutting even though she is still forced to cut her long hair. And she breaks the jar to vent the grievance since she gets an unreasonable punishment. But in the story of “In the Land of the Free”, the Chinese couple has no way to against the government. They ask a white lawyer for help, but the lawyer is also cruel because he just wants to cheat their money. Finally, they give everything they have to the lawyer and get the son back.
首先，文中写故事的部分应用过去时
Faces to 应改为Facing
'the author tries to find'中'tries'应改为'tried'
'since she gets an unreasonable punishment'中的'gets'应改为'had got'
'has no way to against the government'中的'to'和'against'中间应加上'be'