■【汉译英】高手请喽,指点下小弟,谢谢!如何翻译好呢!

The girl left her little town and went to that college, and suddenly she discovered that the world became bigger.Capacious library,white-hair professor,wavy amphitheatre, lectures one by one,dazzling foreign movies and various activities.
The world outside was extremely excellent.

The girl left the little city and went to the university. She found the world was more bigger suddenly. Capacious library,full white-headed professor,wavy amphitheatre,cathedra one by one, dazzling foreign movies, various activities. The outer world is too wonderful.

A girl leave the small city to that college,then find the world become bigger in short while.The better libraries,The white hair professors,The wave steped classrooms,one after another speech talking,differant kinds of foreign movies and different sorts of sporting.How wonderful the outside of the world is!

The girl left town to college.The whole world suddenly come to her.
Library is capacious; professor with whi