帮我修改一下英语论文好吗?

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这是一篇关于是否应废除死刑的英语论文,我写的是应该废除,不管观点同意与否,帮我修改一下文章的错误,谢谢! 修改的简单一点,容易上台讲时下面同学容易懂。

It is irrevocable.有容易犯错误的意思吗?
关于死刑易造成不可挽回的错误,怎么翻译的容易一点

Capital punishment is the cruel and inhumane taking of a human’s life. It is a euphemism for legally killing people. No matter what methods are carried out, it is cruel and inhumane.
这段话有错误吗?能否改的容易一点?

In 1983 John Evans was given three charges of electrocution over a period of fourteen minutes. After the first and second charges, Mr. Evans was still conscious and smoke was coming from all over his body as a result of his flesh burning. An official there even tried to stop the execution or account of it being cruel and unusual punishment, but was unsuccessful.
这是我引用资料上的一段原文,生词稍微有点多,可否修改一下,改容易一点,如果全部抄录的话就有抄袭的嫌疑了。

No one should withstand the cruel capital punishment.语法正确吗?

A prisoner discovered to be blameless can be freed, but neither release nor compensation is possible for a dead man.

重赏之下,必有勇夫。

(1)It is irrevocable,没有容易犯错误的意思,是不可以撤销的意思。
还有要看你怎么用,这it是什么?
The death sentence is irrevocable。
[死刑是不可撤销的。]
这未必,虽然判决已定,但还有可能去找国家领导人特赦,换成终生囚禁,无期徒刑。当然,法制用语是这么表达的。

再探讨irrevocable另一种用法。
The result of death sentence is irrevocable。
[死刑的结果是不可改回。]
因该是指执行后,人死已矣,实事无法改变。

(2)Capital punishment is the cruel and inhumane taking of a human’s life. It is a euphemism for legally killing people. No matter what methods are carried out, it is cruel and inhumane.
这里,euphemism用错了。euphemism是委婉说法、婉言、 雅语。杀头还需用委婉说法吗?要用euphemism,可说成:
Capital punishment is a euphemistic phrase for killing people. This punishment is more than a simple punishment. How can a person live after this punishment?

「Capital punishment is the cruel and inhumane taking of a human’s life.」已经足够了。

The phrase, capital punishment, is a euphemism phrase for killing people. No matter what methods are carried out, killing a perso