英语改错,要详细解释,谢谢,没解释的答案就不要了.谢谢合作.

1.How can I keep those naughty kids shouting and crying outside?It's too noisy.改错
在kids后加from，keep...from就是阻止某人做某事的意思
2."A Tale of Two Cities"is a famous novel was written by Charles Dickens.改错
在was前加which或者that，以构成定语从句。否则一个句子出现两个谓语。
3.I didn't go to it,as well.改错
as well 改为 either。as well 不用于否定句
4.Is there any thing else I can do for you?改错
any 和thing之见没有空格
5.How I hope I were you.改错
hope改为wish。hope后的宾语从句不用虚拟语气
而wish可以

6.to their great joys.改错
joys去掉s。就如同surprise一样，尽管在此处joy这个抽象名词具体化，但不用复数。

7.Don't move until you told to.
told 前加 are。这里是被动语态，所以要加be动词

8.we had learned 5000words at the end of last semester.
除了5000和words应分开（这应是你输写时的错误）之外，我认为此句没有错误。

1.“shouting and crying outside”前加from
keep sb. from doing sth. 表示阻止某人做某事

2.“was written by Charles Dickens”前加which/that，或者把was去掉
同一句子不能出现两个或以上的谓语

3.as well改成either
as well、too只能用于肯