帮我修改我写给我的host family的信!高手进

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/18 05:07:57
嗯,这是小的不才乱写的。
写得不好的地方,给俺改一改。觉得应该补充的地方,给补充补充。
还有,比如说可以给写点,我决定要在host family做的事情..
........谢谢了...(不要笑我写的太菜...)...
Dear host family
I am glad to spend the 10 month in your home. I excited to visit you.
Let me introduce myself. You can know about more me and bring us closer.
My name is xxx. I live in Japan with my parents. My father is a doctor, and he is studying the Master’s course in psychology. My mother is a nurse. She is reading for the doctor of nursing. My family is amicable.
My father and I have the same hobbies. We like reading book, jogging, listen to music, traveling. I especially like reading science fiction novel. I borrow the books from library every week. And sometimes I take a look at my father’s books on psychology. I often jog with my father around the lake near my house. Now I deeply involved with yoga. I occasionally play basketball alone. (In fact, I never take the shoot in the goal.) My family goes to travel every year, feeling

帮你改了^^

Dear host family
I am glad I'll spend 10 months with your family. I am excited for the coming visit.
First,let me introduce myself,whicj would make you know more about me and bring us closer.
My name is xxx. I live in Japan with my parents. My father is a doctor, and he is studying the Master’s course in psychology. My mother is a nurse. She is reading for the Doctor of nursing. My family is amicable.
My father and I share the same hobbies. We like reading books, jogging, listen to music, traveling. I especially like reading science fiction novels. I borrow books from library every week. And sometimes I take a look at my father’s books on psychology. I often jog with my father around the lake near my house. Now I deeply involved with yoga. I occasionally play basketball alone. (In fact, I never take the shoot in the goal.) My family goes to travel every year, feeling the different culture and enjoying various sceneries.
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