UC知道请帮我修改一下这篇英语新闻
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/07/04 09:49:35
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The German scientists have found some law animals that are live in the tropical area these days. One of the scientists said: “These animals had not discovered in the lakes in Germany. They suddenly live in the lakes; perhaps greenhouse effect is one of the big reasons. These animals maybe have some bad thing with them. If they live in the water for a long time, they will pollute the water. If some people drink the water, they will be sick. These animals are not very good for our humans.
太感谢了!!!!!!
The German scientists have found some law animals that are live in the tropical area these days. One of the scientists said: “These animals had not discovered in the lakes in Germany. They suddenly live in the lakes; perhaps greenhouse effect is one of the big reasons. These animals maybe have some bad thing with them. If they live in the water for a long time, they will pollute the water. If some people drink the water, they will be sick. These animals are not very good for our humans.
太感谢了!!!!!!
Recently,some German scientists have found some law animals that are living in these tropical areas . One of the scientists says that these animals have not been discovered in lakes in Germany before. Their sudden appearance may be partly due to the greenhouse effect. These animals probably carry some viruses,and if they go on living in the lakes,the water may be conteminated and not proper for people to drink any more. In a word, they are assumedly hidden threat to human beings.
我不明白你说的law animals是什么意思.是一种动物的名字还是另有它意? 在这儿我就没改.
这也叫新闻，新闻的最基本写法是在Lead中加入who, when, what, where and why
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