英语高手给我改改.非常感谢

Sandstorm is a natural phenomenon that causes devastating disasters. It can make people lose their visions. It can bury the farmland and brings tremendous lost to the farmers. It can damage the transportation system and paralize the traffic. Most of all, it damages people's health.

沙暴是一种自然现象，它会引起灾难性的后果。
它会让人目不视物。会埋葬农田而给农民带来巨大的损失。会毁坏交通系统引起交通瘫痪。最为重要的是，它对人们的健康不利。