大家帮我看看我的这段个人翻译对不对?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/01 02:09:20
汉语意思我想说:你好,我是Becky,我工作的主要职责是负责信息收集.包括负责日常信息的搜集,包括最新动态,行业信息;协助Tom完成客户列表的整理;整理会议信息并在每个月一号发出会议提醒;在每个月中旬发送电子期刊;和其他的市场直销活动的具体实施和跟踪,如mass email, mass fax, mass mailing
以下是我自己翻译的,帮忙给我改改:
Hello, this is Becky, my duty is mainly responsible for the collection of information, such as latest developments, industry news; assisting Tommy finish the customer list collection; clearing up the tradeshow list and forwarding the meeting alert on the 1st of the month; forwarding the enewsletter in mid-month and tracking other direct marketing activities, for example, mass mail, mass fax, mass mailing.

Hello, I am Becky, I work the main responsibilities of information collection. Responsible for day-to-day gathering information, including the latest trends in the information industry; Tom assist customers complete list of finishing; Collating information meeting on the 1st of the month and issued reminded; In mid-month e - periodicals; , and other direct marketing activities to the specific implementation and tracking, such as mass email, mass fax, mass mailing
Following is a translation of my own, I would like to help change :

你自己翻译的就可以。