UC知道请检查这几篇英语短文 指出错误和原因
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Today was sunny.Hot weather! I went to swimning with my best friends.In the pool,there were many peopel.So kind of crowded.But we had good time.Then we to eat a lot of things.They were very delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After
Tuesday,July 31st
Today was the summer of nine days.These days
playing very happy.Today, I had to be worked hard.
6:00 I got up, eat a bread, a bowl of milk.I wrote a
morning of the homework.I was hungry.I ate a bowl
of noodles they were awful.I watched TV, then
worked hard.From my mother,She cooked dinner
for me.Today, very happy day! !
Tuesday,July 10th
Great weather! it was sunny and hot all day.
Today was the first day of our summer vacation.
All of us were
1.首先，所有表示天气的应该用一般现在时
2.第一篇文章
“had good time”——改成——“had a good time" 习惯用语表达
“Then we to eat a lot of things”在to前面加上went。
"I liked to eat the ice-cream" 我喜欢吃冰淇淋是陈述一个事实，应该用一般现在时。
3.第二篇文章
"Today was the summer of nine days"是陈述事实，应该用一般现在时
“These days playing very happy.”上面是讲这一天，现在又说这些天，前后矛盾.
"I had to be worked hard. "--改成--"I had to work hard. "
哎，我没办法帮你全部改完，你错的地方太多了，不当面说的话很难说清楚，你还是向你老师请教吧！
Tuesday,July 24th
Today is sunny.It's very a hot day! I went to swim with my best friends.In the pool,there were many peopel.So kind of crowded.But we had good time.Then we went to eat a lot of things.They were very delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate two.
Tuesday,July 31st
Today is the ninth day of summer begining .These days I
played very happy.Today, I had to be worked hard.
I got up at 6:00, eat a bread, a bowl of milk.I did for a whole morning.Then