自己写的短文,找错误(初中)

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/22 03:58:33
Thanks for your letter. l will help you about your problem.
First of all,you should tell Mei. She is a clever and can speak english well. she should be confident and brave. Don't feel nervous talking in front of many people. she can belive she will do it better. Don't be shy.
Then, your classmates should encourage Mei. Don't make Mei be nervous. Because she doesn't let her clssmates down .your classmates should belive Mei.
Finally,l hope my advice will help you and Mei.

she can belive she will do it better.她要相信自己, 这句对吗?

she is a cleaver什么?
talking前加个when
make sb adj 可以了
she doesn't let....改将来吧

语法没啥大问题..就是不顺...
she must believe she will make it 应该可以了吧...

她要相信自己 she must believe in what she do and she will be ok.

she can belive she will do it better.这句对的,不过真正的意思是:她可以相信她会做得更好