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Return Campus
Owing to something need be dealt. I return campus today which is familiar to me but a little strange. When I enter into the university, the feeling is so complex that I can’t describe with any words. Maybe a little curious, a little scared I can’t face to, or a little yearning. No appropriate word can express my words suitably---- My heart really supposed to say. I admit that I want to be a student again, but the problem I must face is that I have no quality to be student when I walk out of the gate of campus. Luckily, I work hard for my dream Which is the only way to be a formal student. Consequently, I will do my best towards my goals of life till the dream come true.
Promise little, but do much!

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Return to the campus
I returned to my campus because I had something important to deal with.It was familiar to me ,but I also felt something strange.When I entered into it,my feeling was too complex,and it was beyond my words.A little curious, a little scared I didn't want to face, or a little yearning.I cannot find a proper word can express myself--- My heart really supposed to say. I should admit that I wanted to be a student once again, but the problem is that I am disqualified when I graduated from here. Comfortably, I work hard for my dream because I believe it is the only way to be a formal student. Therefore, no matter what will happen.I will try my best to make my dream come true.
Promise less, but do more!