帮我看看这个小写作练习好吗?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/27 08:37:41
我自己也写了一个,不过就连我自己一看也知道语法错了好多,各位英语强人们帮我写一个让我查查错误好吗? 谢谢

写作:

说明:根据下列信息以公关部的名义给所有员工写一份公告,邀请他们为公司庆祝活动献计献策。
1.历史与现状:成立15年,在效益方面处于同行业五强之一。
2.庆祝活动:举行一系列活动,庆祝取得的成就。
3.欢迎献计献策:被采用者有奖,所提建设送往本部门办公室。

Anouncement
Our company is going to hold a party to celebrate our great accomplishment this year.Since the establishment 15years ago, our company has always been in the top5 in this industry and has earned great profit and fame. Now, we can celebrate the achievement we have accomplished and looking forward to a more bright and solid tomorrow.
We'll hold a series a activities to celebrate which may adopted from your suggestions, so if you have good ideas, welcome to present to us.
Anyone who has given an idea that has been adopted will be rewarded, so move now and diliver it to the office of the public relations dipartment.
Thank you
Public Relations Dept.XXX

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你没写英语,怎么看语法错啊!