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I have two close friends, Li Hui and Wen Li, of whom the former is my classmate in high school and the latter is a classmate in university. They are all very nice girls, of the kind I like, so I get along very well with them and has developed a lasting friendship with both. Maybe you guess three of us are alike in a million ways. However, the fact is that they are completely different in personality. I will make comparisons between them.
Hui is a very confident and cheerful girl, while Li is a little shy and pessimistic. Maybe this difference results from their different experiences. Hui, smart and diligent, has always been the best student in her class since her first year of primary school, getting high marks in exams, doing best in homework, being the monitor and always helping other students. In university, I happened to be in the same class and share the same dorm with her. She won the Student Union Election by her confidence and capabi
病句多得恐怖，不是很愿意改。。。。
想问你一下，你念什么年级？？
题目就出问题了Contrast between Two of My friends
what are you contrasting? contrast means to talk about the differences, compare means to talk about both the similarities and differences.
if you're comparing your friends' personalities, please correct your heading first!!
should be, contrast/compare ( i don't know which one you prefer) my two friends' personalities
就帮你改第一段跟最后一段
I have two close friends, they are Li Hui and Wen Li. Li Hui used to be my classmate in High
Schol,and I met Wen Li later in university.They are both very nice, and I have
developed good relationships with them. Nevertheless, these two girls are quite different in personality, I am going to talk about it in the following.
In coclusion, Li Hui and Wen Li are two extremes in personality.But I have to say, thay are both very excellent. They can always support me whenever I need help and their suggest