请帮我检查英文有没有语病,谢谢

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你需按你部P&P中附表的要求做好每月客户资料的收集与整理,并于次月10日前连同绩效数据一起交我批阅。

You should submit your monthly guests information, which is recorded on your P&P attached blank, together with your KPI figures to me before the tenth day of the next month.

客户用CLIENTS吧

Client

n.[C]
1. 委托人,(律师等的)当事人
2. 顾客,客户
He has been a valued client of our bank for many years.
他多年来一直是我们银行的重要客户。

You need to submit the monthly clients information according to the criteria recorded in the chart in the P&P of your department, and submit them to me with the KPI(绩效数据?) data/figures by the 10th of the coming month.