UC知道请高手给我看下这稿演讲稿,指出其中的语法错误及表达不够好的地方
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I’m the only child in my family. There were once many people asked my mother why she chose to have just one baby, especially a girl which seems to reasonless. At that time my mother would answer them smilingly: I want to bring her up with my soul and heart. How generous they are. I still remember how my patient they are when I learn how to walk and how to talk. I’m a naughty girl in my childhood, and I had many bad habits ,thus father and mother always angry at me, but they never give me up, they taught how to get rid of my bad habits and how to
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