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冬天将要来临，很多人感冒了
我盘算着该去买件外套了
我来到市中心街道的一家服装店
我一进门就有一个售货员微笑问好
我试了很多衣服，最后看中其中的一件
售货员微笑看着我说：“这是一件女式外套，现在你还要么？”

The winter was coming so that many people had caught a cold.
I planed to buy a coat, so I walk into a wear shop in the down town.
A salesgirl gave me a smile since I walked in.
I've tryed many styles and finally got one.
The salesgirl looked at me with a smile and said:"this is a woman's coat,do you still want it now?"

冬天将要来临，很多人感冒了
Winter will be coming soon, a lot of people catch a cold.

我盘算着该去买件外套了
I think that it's time to buy a coat.

我来到市中心街道的一家服装店
I went to a clothing store setting in the center of city streets

我一进门就有一个售货员微笑问好
When I was going into, a saleswoman greeted smilingly

我试了很多衣服，最后看中其中的一件
After tried a lot of clothes, I choose one of them finally.

售货员微笑看着我说：“这是一件女式外套，现在你还要么？”
Saleswoman said smilingly: "This is a women's overcoats. Do you still choose it now?"

冬天将要来临，很多人感冒了
我盘算着该去买件外套了
我来到市中心街道的一家服装店