帮看看这句英文有没有错。

没问题，不过我觉得这样更顺口：
From the cartoon, we can tell that there are more and more cars, with the rapid development of the society. with介宾部分放到最后．

基本没什么错误,但see用 know更好些

没有错误，但最好在WE前加个逗号。
From the cartoon， we can see that with the rapid development of the society,there are more and more cars.