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要点：压力产生的原因 如何解决压力
总分15分 能给几分
How to reduce stress
In modern society, the stress of people is increasing day by day.
What cause the people's stress?In my opnion, there are serval reasons explain that: the work time last too long, some people will begin working at 8:00am and end in the evening, evensomeone will stop working at 10:00pm. the number of population is increasing, thespace and the job that we depend on is more and more small.So people feel stress is too much.
How to reduce the stress? Let'smkes full use of the holiday.we can go to park,forget the nervous of work,look at the beautiful scenery. When we are working, take a deep breath and breathe a fresh air.It is good for to reduce the stress!
总分15分 能给几分
How to reduce stress
In modern society, the stress of people is increasing day by day.
What cause the people's stress?In my opnion, there are serval reasons explain that: the work time last too long, some people will begin working at 8:00am and end in the evening, evensomeone will stop working at 10:00pm. the number of population is increasing, thespace and the job that we depend on is more and more small.So people feel stress is too much.
How to reduce the stress? Let'smkes full use of the holiday.we can go to park,forget the nervous of work,look at the beautiful scenery. When we are working, take a deep breath and breathe a fresh air.It is good for to reduce the stress!
请注意关联词的使用，可以让语言更流畅；此外，小的语法问题也有体现。再有就是首尾呼应，典型的三段式比较保险稳妥。
基本可以得到10-11分左右。