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good morning every,today i am going to talk about the documentary "animal's games".Everyone have been watch the documentary.IN this process,the schoolmates frequently sent out the laughter.this is a really interesting films,right?
In the film,we can see that many animals are physically stronger than humans.however,actually,humanity are dominating the world.Why can like this?I think everyone can answer this question.Yes,it is wisdom.Humanity who are use their wisdom to construct the world.They can use tools to help their life.For example:the aniaml use their Excrement to kill the enemy.But humanity solves the danger with the gun.It is not only clean,but also has the might.that is why humanity are different with the animal.On the other hand,hummanity have tenacious study spirit.Because of this kind of spirit,the humanity who can solve a lot of diffculty problem,achievement today"s happy life.
早晨好, 我今天将要谈论新闻
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good morning everybody/everyone, every不能指“所有人”
today i am going to talk about the documentary "animal's games".对
Everyone have WATCHED the documentary.不用被动语态
DURING this process,
the schoolmates frequently sent out A laughter.
IT WAS a really interesting films,ISN'T IT?这样更地道
FROM the film,we can see that many animals are physically stronger than humans.
however,（去掉actually）HUMANBEINGS（人类，Humanity更侧重于不是动物，表示人类用HUMANBEING更好） are dominating the world.
WHY DOES IT BEING LIKE THIS？
I think everyone can answer this question.Yes,it is wisdom.HUMANBEINGS（who去掉，加who后面必须要加从句） are use their wisdom to construct the world.
They can use tools to help their life.For example，（the去掉） aniamlS use their Excrement to kill THEIR enemy，WHILE HUMANBEINGS SOLVE THEIR danger with the gun.It is not only clean,but also POWERFUL（没有have the might这种说法 might很少这样用）.THIS is why HUMANBEINGS are different with the animalS.On the other hand,H