大家帮我看看这样写有没错误

I have already submitted the summary of the research plan in consultation with Professor. Smith of the depart Computer Science and Technology and had got acceptance consent as a research student.

I am in China now.I shall send a self-addressed envelope with stamps to you, and what else I should do?

In addition, Could you tell me which expense is necessary and what is necessary for me to be careful?

英语水平烂，大家帮我改改~

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