UC知道请高中英语老师帮忙改以下！
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我写了一篇作文，语法错误很多，我也不知道怎么改，也不好意思问老师，只好请这里的高中英语的老师帮我改一下，提出建议及改进方法,谢谢！
题目：随着网络的发展，目前很多人给亲朋好友发电子贺卡，请根据以下阐述电子贺卡的优越性。
1可播送动画和声音
2传递速度快，节省钱
3形式多样，可以从网上下载，可自行设计
4有利于保护环境
注意：文章须包含以上要点，可适当发挥，不要逐条翻译
我的文章: A new way to give a wishes
With the internet developing , many people send electronic card for their parents and friend nowadays. It`s a new way to give a wishes.
There are many advantages of it. For example . It can play flash. you can send your voice by the electronic card . Your friend who received your card will receive fastly. It cost your nothing for send it.You can choose which do you like a kind of it. There are many kinds.
You can download it in the web site or design by yourself. It can save your money so you didn`t need to buy post card. The environment is protected for we don`t cut down the trees.
题目：随着网络的发展，目前很多人给亲朋好友发电子贺卡，请根据以下阐述电子贺卡的优越性。
1可播送动画和声音
2传递速度快，节省钱
3形式多样，可以从网上下载，可自行设计
4有利于保护环境
注意：文章须包含以上要点，可适当发挥，不要逐条翻译
我的文章: A new way to give a wishes
With the internet developing , many people send electronic card for their parents and friend nowadays. It`s a new way to give a wishes.
There are many advantages of it. For example . It can play flash. you can send your voice by the electronic card . Your friend who received your card will receive fastly. It cost your nothing for send it.You can choose which do you like a kind of it. There are many kinds.
You can download it in the web site or design by yourself. It can save your money so you didn`t need to buy post card. The environment is protected for we don`t cut down the trees.
with the development of interent , many people send electronic card for their parents and friends.Surely it`s a new way to give wishes.There are many advantages of it. For example , it can play flash. You can send your voice by the electronic card which your friend can receive quickly.But it cost you nothing .You can choose whatever you like. There are so many kinds that you can download on web site or design by yourself. It can save your money so that you shouldn`t need to buy one. And the action our saving papers will save a ot trees being not cut for papers.