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The story make we reader, a cannot join and felling's world, a sad story. For whole summer, of a day Margot is lock in a closet, and cannot see the sunof she's been long for sice her first came to live on Venus. The kids in her class trap her go in closet, because ther think Margot acts as if she was better then everybody, she came to Venus after the order kids, she rembers ther sun, order kids just see the sun during they about two years old, and never seen the sun again. This why I feel stupid.
After a hour, sun was disappears which mean the summer of Venus's summer is end, they go back inside the closet, they all remembers her. In All Su
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All summer in a Day by Ray Bradbury. This story is about a young girl, living on Venus came to the Earth. Venus just has a hour of summer which mean one hour of sun for every seven years. Margot, the main character, order kids deprived her summer; they lock her in a closet, because Margot was different to order kids.
The story make we reader, a cannot join and feeling’s world, a sad story. For whole summer, of a day Margot is lock in a closet, and cannot see the sun of she's been long for since her first came to live on Venus. The kids in her class trap her go in closet, because they think Margot acts as if she was better then everybody, she came to Venus after the order kids, she remembers the sun, order kids just see the sun during they about two years old, and never seen the sun again. This why I feel stupid.
After an hour, sun was disappears which mean the summer of Venus's summer is end, they go back inside the clos