帮忙改改我写的作文，谢谢了~

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Everyone likes reading books.I like the book called TO ALIVE.It is written by a writer from China,called YU HUA.

YU HUA is a well-known writer in China.His articles often profundity.They are reveal some things that you may not know and believe.

And the book ,TO ALIVE,narrate a person who called FU GUI endures much perssure,and he regards problems as challenges.

TO ALIVE was narrating between a person and his destiny friendship, this was the most touching friendship, because they mutually felt grateful, simultaneously also mutually hated, their who also was unable to get rid of opposite party, simultaneously nobody reason complained opposite party.

I like this book very much!

本人初3水平
谢谢各位大虾们帮忙改正！~~

Everyone likes to read books (或 likes reading 就够).
I like a book called TO ALIVE. It is written by a writer from China, called YU HUA.

YU HUA is a well-known writer in China. His articles have (句子没有动词) profund (message, meaning). They reveal some things that you may not know and believe.

And the book ,TO ALIVE, narrated a person called FU GUI who endured much pressure, and he regarded problems as challenges.

TO ALIVE narrated between a person and his destiny friendship. This was the most touching friendship, because they mutually felt grateful, simultaneously also mutually hated, their who also was unable to get rid of opposite party, simultaneously nobody reason complained opposite party. (依据可以道出所说 showed love-hate relationship)

I like this book very much!

要多写亮点，别人不会用的高级句型和短语

Hello, everyone!
I'm Wangtao,a 14years old student witch study in Changchun No.2
Middle School. I want to join in the English Conn