大家帮着挑错,出国留学材料目录

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/30 06:27:38
我准备投寄材料了,这个是对所有材料的一个罗列,放在第一页作为目录
请大家看看有无语法错误
An official university transcript

Two Letters of Recommendation from two of my professors

A copy of appraisal for my internship in The people's court of BeiJing XuanWu division and recommendation from a judge

A copy of Transcript of my TOEFL record

A copy of Transcript of my CET-6 record

Personal statement

Research proposal

A copy of my ID card

Copies of bachelorship diploma and certificate of graduation

Copies of certification of eligibility for two of the “one hundred creative projects” I participate in

Two corpuses of set results for the “one hundred creative projects”

A copy of certification of single item scholarship
还有一个问题,在这里,所有格my出现是不是很合适?例如,是写my professor,my TOEFL record好呢,还是客观地去掉my(可是去掉又很别扭)或者写applicant's?

这种LIST,越简洁越好!~

Official university transcript

Two Letters of Recommendation

Copy of appraisal for internship in The people's court of BeiJing XuanWu division and recommendation from a judge

Copy of TOEFL Score

Copy of of CET-6 Score

Personal statement

Research proposal

Copy of my ID card

Copies of bachelorship diploma and certificate of graduation

Copies of certification of eligibility for two of the “one hundred creative projects”

Two corpuses of set results for the “one hundred creative projects”

Copy of certification of single item scholarship

最好不要出现MY,I之类的词,有点多此一举,美国人讲求的是效率,简单.
applicant's???? 你的目的就是申请,不说他们也知道,越简单越明了越好!~

好运!~

没问题