英语高手请进来帮忙……关于贝克汉姆

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我在下周二要在班上进行一个英语表演。而我就自己写了篇文章。就是下面的。希望各位帮我做些修改或改进。由于自己水平有限，有些词不知道，很多翻译得很牵强。还有我是先写中文再翻译的。 That day David Beckham left, from Spain to America. He took his smile away, as well as his football.
Ever I was not like him, even a bit of hate. In my opinion, so beautiful a face is not necessary for a real man, especially a man playing in the football filed. But later I know, so many people have not see Dave’s outstanding aspect witch was covered by his news out of football filed in their heart for a long time, and me is one.
So many times , I see his tears , and the sad face , all of these tells those sadness that could not be understand , it’s ambitions could not come true again and again .Just as those successless heroes in ancient China.
So many times .I think, if he could choice, he must want to be the champion of the World Cup or the Euro Cup., but not his handsome face and smile .at least the David in the football filed is , and the one in my heart .
那天,大卫.贝

But later I know, so many people have not see Dave’s outstanding aspect which was covered by his news from the football field for a long time, and I am one of them.
So many times , I see his tears , and his sad face , all of these tells those sadness that could not be understand , it’s ambitions that could not come true again and again ,Just as those ancient heroes who struggle to the end but unsuccess.
So many times .I think, if he could choice, he must want to hold up the champion cup of the World or the Europe, but not the handsome face and smile ,at least the David in the football field want to, and the one in my heart .

你写的够好了，只是有几句有点语法错误和单词拼写错误，我简单改了几句，也不一定对，你看看吧，相互学习吧，别骂我就好，呵呵

好像很N多问题……

随便举个例子：把field全都写成了filed...我还纳闷啥意思呢

which 被写成了witch。。。successless还是头回看到，应该是unsuccessful吧。。。句子问题就不谈了，建议让高手重写吧

我也觉得楼主的英语水平太高了，我只看出了最后一句有问题——at least the David in the football filed is , and the one in my heart .

David前面不应该