英语好的进,帮忙改错

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An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea
1.between France and Ehgland in the balloon in 1784.High
2.over the water ,they discover a hole in the balloon.The
3.hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the
4.balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was
5.coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into
6.the water to make the balloon light. It statted to rise
7.higher again. So it was still too close to the water
8.Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to
9.save themselves. The crowed waiting for to greet them in
10.England was very suiprised see this when the balloon
landed in front of them

11.I apprecicate your help very well.On the first day of
12.camp,you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.After
13.that,you always gave me specially attention and inspired
14.to me to join in actic

1. in the balloon --> in a balloon
2. discover -->discovered
3. keeps --> keeping
4. 正确
5. up -->down
6. statted -->started
7. So -->But
8. his --> their
9. 去掉 to
10. see -->to see

11 apprecicate -> appreciate (拼写错误), very well -> very much
12 myself -> me
13 没有错误
14 to me -> me 去掉to
15 the other -> other
16 changed -> has changed
17 as new person -> as a new person
18 but -> and
19 admitting -> admitted
20 becoming -> to become

1 the-a
2discover-discovered
3keeps-keeping
4没有错误
5 up-down
6 light-lighter
7So-But
8 his-their
9去掉for
10 surprised to see
11

1 the--a
2 discovered
3 keeps--keeping
4 对
5 up-- down
6 statted--started
7so-- but
8 his--their
9 for 去掉
10surp